I have experimented with different colours for the second line. however it is still hard to read, so i will look into using different type faces and play around with the colour more
i think that i have over done it with the blending and smudgeing tools in this variation, but i have learnt some new techniques so it is ok. I will do another colour variation which uses more solid colours which will make the parts that have highlights on them, stand out more. i will also do another vertion where i use the actual type rather than this handdrawn type which i have used. because it will look alot more cleaner.